Generally speaking, it's highly debated issue whether or not the life nowadays is easier and more comfortable than before and this topic can be approached from several angels due to its complexity. Deeply deliberating over the issue, I strongly agree with the statement that life is easier and more comfortable than former life when my grandparents were kids.
First and foremost, the technology had not yet been established, therefore, if you need to solve or search any subject, you have to spend a lot of time to find out. Needless to say, once established like, TVs, computers, and all other inventions make the life uncomplicated and you can solve any problem you want within minutes.
As a matter of fact, there is another subtle point which must be born in mind, The internet. The internet makes everything available and at any time. On a day I have to do an assignment, I started work on it at midnight and finished it within 3 hours, My grandma, which is a doctor, was watching me and she told me that I was so lucky due to the fact that they did not have this opportunity.
In addition, there is a lot of improvement in medicine, which has a vital impact on our life. All the medical equipment have dramatically evolved. To be more precise, reliance on the medical devices and all the new medicines that newly published, the life range has become longer.
In conclusion, due to the aforementioned, I'm too huge extent, agree with this statement. This doesn't say that the other views point is wrong or not convincing, but, I think the reasons I provided in favor of my opinion is strong.
- TPO 30 Integrated 75
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment – doing things they like to do – rather than doing things they should do. 76
- tpo29 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67021276596 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77579855045 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8474525895 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184085068092 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06003733099 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776260519848 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911748040772 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766771001071 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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