Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your facilities. I took a trip to France last month and adapt on the suggestion of one of my friend who has been in this hotel I decided to book two nights during the time I was going to stay on this English city which I have no idea about its language.
In fact, the first night when I arrived there I found it so hot and because of that I went to admission and demanded for lower temperature. However they responded to my request immediately, they could not provide an appropriate temperature at last.
So, i came had to wear more clothes in spite of my willingness because I do not find it comfortable.
Therefore, I am going to ask for a modern facility which goes to weather in a suitable way and I feel I am entitled to compensations and get some part of my refund back.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
FATEMEH BAGHERI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ion and demanded for lower temperature. However they responded to my request immediatel...
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Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n appropriate temperature at last. So, i came had to wear more clothes in spite ...
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Line 8, column 74, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a suitable way" with adverb for "suitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...a modern facility which goes to weather in a suitable way and I feel I am entitled to compensatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, so, therefore, i feel, in fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45614035088 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81411140661 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690058479532 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3530533992 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110170138727 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037795105642 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345923714876 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446238928598 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041375234425 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.