many people go to university for academic study. more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. to what extent do you agree or disagree
for graduation and acadmic studies many students move towards different universities. peoples should be boosted up for doing other trainings also because there are alot of deficiencies of well skilled workers like plumbers and electricians. i completely agree with the statement that human being should give attention too to other works . there are two main reasons for it.
firstly, not every versity student can get their desire job in practical life and not every person is hard worker in studies. some just go there for entartainment .after four year, spending in university without any practicality he spend rest of life just in moving around
- some people believe that we can not learn anything from our past to live our lives today while other believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human life discuss both views and give your opinion 64
- Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- many people go to university for academic study. more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. to what extent do you agree or disagree 22
- some people consider price as most important things to think about when buying products (such as cell phones) or a service (e.g medical treatment). do you agree or di agree. 73
- These days everyone seems to have more possessions e g computers cars mobile phones etc Our strong desire to own these things is making us less aware of important personal qualities such as kindness and concern for others Do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 544.0 1615.20841683 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 104.0 315.596192385 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.19343686757 4.20363070211 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73643427883 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.826923076923 0.561755894193 147% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 506.74238477 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9511904589 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212498993718 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087972732903 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795000863385 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149286994346 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935903593058 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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