The chart below the information given the alcohol related deaths in seven countries and the average of beer consumption each person in 2005
The tabular chart illustrates the information about that how many men and women deaths it cause by alcohol(Lithuania, Ireland, Czech republic, Canada, Estonia, Germany and Austria). While, how many people consumed beer in 2005.
A quick look on graph is enough to make it clear that in seven different countries among males more than dead through alcohol used as compared to among females. Whereas, the figure for beer consumption in Czech republic was the highest than that others six nations.
To commence with, in the Czech republic the average of each citizen drank 132 litres beer on 2005 and that caused the highest number of alcohol related death in this country(about 1369000 death) and which was followed by Germany consumed the second highest amount of beer and it caused the second highest death in this country which was about 1185000. On the other hand, the number of beer consumed in Canada was the lowest at less than 86 litres but, the figure for the alcohol related deaths was higher(more than 5 lakhs) than Estonia and Lithuania.
As far as, in Estonia each citizen at 98 litres beer consumed and it caused the alcohol related deaths in men and women about(383000), which was the one time doubled as compared to Lithuania around 125000 of deaths it caused by alcohol and beer consumed at 91 litres each person.
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Suggestion: causes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85840707965 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42918339047 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495575221239 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.3318069154 43.030603864 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.857142857 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2857142857 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310503957998 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132031814784 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585015334172 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174814614782 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461382598172 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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