Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. Brown,
Hi! How are you? I hope your family is well. I am writing to apologize for the two days disturbance due to the loud music that me and my classmates created. We did not noticed that it was inappropriate to increase the volume of our music.
Our group is practicing for an upcoming contest "Best Band" that will be held on December 1, 2018, at our art theatre in school. Since we dont have enough budget to rent for a studio, we decided to practice at our house. In addition, the second day was intense because my parents only allowed us limited time to use the garage as our place to practice our originally composed lyrics of music.
Again, we are very sorry for the inconvenience that we have caused to the neigbourhood. Next time, we will tone down the volume of our music. Hopefully by the end of the month, we will put eggcrates on the wall so that the sound will be reduced when heard outside our house
Sincerely yours,
Anna Ala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr. Brown, Hi! How are you? I hope your family is w...
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Suggestion: notice
...e and my classmates created. We did not noticed that it was inappropriate to increase t...
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...to increase the volume of our music. Our group is practicing for an upcoming ...
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Suggestion: don't
... at our art theatre in school. Since we dont have enough budget to rent for a studio...
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... originally composed lyrics of music. Again, we are very sorry for ...
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...utside our house Sincerely yours, Anna Ala
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52542372881 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50749459149 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672316384181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.022228786 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963426668023 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478596199788 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510690635197 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726285245997 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336153219237 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.