You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Thank you friend for the holiday
2. Explain that you left your wallet in their house
3. give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear John,
I'm writing this letter to express my gratitude for the holiday I had spent with you. I'd reached safely on 10th of October. I mistakenly had left my wallet in your room on the table.
Let me explain in more detail. As you remember, we had gone to the local museum a day before my departure from your city, being very tired I had placed my wallet on your study table and had forgotten to pick that up in hurry. In addition to, my purse is in black with company logo imprinted on the right corner. it had my driving license, student card, and some money.
Could you please send it to me by courier as I need the card for lab examination scheduled next week. As I had told you that I have changed my place after returning here. I'm here by attaching my new address with this letter.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours Truly,
Micheal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e for the holiday I had spent with you. Id reached safely on 10th of October. I mi...
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...any logo imprinted on the right corner. it had my driving license, student card, a...
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... changed my place after returning here. Im here by attaching my new address with t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hear from you soon. Yours Truly, Micheal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3850931677 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19940685931 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2869707777 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8333333333 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328549319244 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113631197048 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818481951459 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207424810689 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540217535478 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.