Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Now a days, crossing the borders between countries has become easier. Some people believe that only Reason for learning an external language is for Traveling or doing job in overseas however, others disagree that these shouldn't be the only reason. This essay agrees that learning a foreign language not only for employing in an organization but also for understanding via gaining knowledge.
Firstly, Doing a job and traveling to other countries has become often. Especially, Adults who are traveling far away from their hometown to overseas, for earning money or academic purpose such as: applying for universities. Secondly, the people, who are aiming to get a job in other countries needs to have multiple skills like, Fluency in foreign languages. Finally, if any employer or an person who doesn't have knowledge in external language, it would have a harmful effect on his profession.
Alternatively, acclimatizing oneself in an external language can help people. On the other hand, fluency in an unknown language can lead to gaining knowledge for instance: cross-culture understanding. Secondly, mostly it supports the book-lover to gain information such as: Reading books about, other nations Geography. Thirdly, it helps people to make friends from other countries by using social platforms. Finally, learning a new language, helps the public in various fields apart from getting jobs or work.
In conclusion, although majority of people, learning a new language for the purpose of getting money or academic, wouldn't be moral. In my opinion, learning a new language should also be used for gaining External information about other nations such as: their culture and land scape.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, crossing the borders between countries...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, crossing the borders between countries...
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Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...eas however, others disagree that these shouldnt be the only reason. This essay agrees t...
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Line 2, column 388, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... languages. Finally, if any employer or an person who doesnt have knowledge in ext...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nally, if any employer or an person who doesnt have knowledge in external language, it...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...e purpose of getting money or academic, wouldnt be moral. In my opinion, learning a new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37358490566 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84952888751 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1057722574 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261689305113 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863318076326 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913605787025 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167277466773 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11128468734 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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