The claim made by the author about the financial support, culture and tradition seems little to vague with the information provided to accept or deny. The author mentions that major cities in the country must claim majority of the funds as they are primary source of country heritage development and preservation.
Let’s alone the take example of India. The country has 28 states and 4 metro cities. The financial distribution is mainly controlled by federal government and state government. Majority of fund in state government is given to state capital which supposed to have major portion of population when compared to other districts. The major cities are more of job creation and distribution hub in these states. This attracts a lot more people from various part of countries to migrate to that place. Lot of resource are invested in infrastructure development and market growth of the city. More the development more far way we move from our traditional existence of old India.
Morden cities are a diverse culture where people from lot of places move in search of better career and future. The mix of different culture actually make people adapt other culture and tradition that makes their own tradition more vulnerable. A whole lot of shift are observed in these places which makes people concerned about their existence of their culture. Paris is capital of fashion Industry. People from around the globe come there .The city has transformed to local's population to a cosmopolitan city. People in such cities are not much bothered about their culture preservation to avoid conflict among themselves. The city cites a best example where putting major chunk with above rule will not produce desired effect.
I remember small district that have large population puts a lot of possibility of culture and customs preservation. These people are more indulge in the activities that they have inherited from their parents. Intrinsic characteristic of these process have knowledge and practices of Indian tradition. The more we go deeper in the roots the more complaisant will be experience. If you looks at the textiles and handloom market in India, majority of products are manufactured in villages and small cities. These places help continue tradition for decades. The author need to widen his perspective and accumulate more such examples form more strong hypothesis about the system.
It’s not always true the small town males way for such cultural involvement, there are cases when large industrial plants and installed. This takes toll on those areas for next coming years. Urbanisation might be boon for many but bane for most.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20979020979 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71399553378 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5337995338 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3619082814 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2962962963 5.21951772744 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228756621929 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552020953756 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536834759606 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126564855736 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796473917688 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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