The graph below shows the average montly salary and the prices of white television.
The bar graph demonstrate the people who participate in drama, painting, sculpture and language according to gender while pie chart provide information about population according to age group.
Overall, what stand out from the graph is that while the popularity of language activities grew over the period in question, and that painting participant remainly high throughput the number of drama intrusted in fell sharply. Old people figure, mean while saw an increase and adult followed by drop.
With regard to drama and language, the women figure were roughly identical at 10 and 20 participants respectively. However, whereas men climbed to reach at 20 in drama before levelling off for the remainder of the period, the sclupture peaked at 10 men and women drop the 5 in the figure.
Turning to the generation, population stayed consistent with old generation figure remaining between 42 percent throughout the period as popularity was nearly as high as children in the first half of decade studied, with number of population rising from 5 percent to 42 percent, but time to time saw under 20 number crash to adult number, a figure which had not changed by last year and slightly increased children population.
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- The graph below shows the average montly salary and the prices of white television. 11
- Some people think studying from the past offers no benefits to today's life, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information for us. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 73
- In many countries, government are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money. 73
- The bar graph shows the number of overseas students enrolled in the first year law course at a college. 73
- Today, some food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only eat locally produced food. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: meanwhile
...ted in fell sharply. Old people figure, mean while saw an increase and adult followed by d...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, whereas, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14141414141 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78121000078 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.596131767 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.666666667 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0215284820496 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0119337812158 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0168769152457 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0161323686214 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163250454752 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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