You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Explain the important event.
Apologize for the situation
Suggest a new arrangement
Dear Jean,
Hi! How are you? I hope everything is great. I have a good and bad news for you. Let me start with my good news, my youngest sister is finally getting married. We are all ecstatic since she is the only single among my other siblings.
However, the bad news is, they already set their wedding ceremony date on the day of my flight to London. She was not aware of my vacation trip, so she included me on her list of bridesmaid.
Since I cannot decline her request, I would like to sincerely apologize for prioritizing this big event than flying to visit you. I know you will understand me, though I feel bad since your manager granted your one week holiday just to become my personal tour guide.
I would still love to see London and execute all what we had planned. They will shoulder my re-booking fees. Moreover, they will hand me extra cash for souvenirs leading to a win-win situation.
Let me know if first week of January will suit your schedule. Looking forward to see you.
All the best,
Anna ala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jean, Hi! How are you? I hope everything is gr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e only single among my other siblings. However, the bad news is, they already s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncluded me on her list of bridesmaid. Since I cannot decline her request, I wo...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...just to become my personal tour guide. I would still love to see London and exe...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...venirs leading to a win-win situation. Let me know if first week of January wil...
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Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...ill suit your schedule. Looking forward to see you. All the best, Anna ala
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45744680851 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30163698708 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675531914894 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5093727846 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.8666666667 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5333333333 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125494251485 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416924775383 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515938960362 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724454337119 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649014845752 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.7 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.