Dear Mr smith,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the issue which employees are facing with daily. As a matter of fact, we are suffering from lacking of parking in the workplace.
Actually, my coworkers and I have to utilize our own car in order to be on time, despite of that, we will be late that is really hard to be compensated. Unfortunately, the street is not spacious enough for cars parking and it always lead to numerous issues.
I am going to give you some recommendation and hope to be considered. In fact, the basement is remaining useless, I would be really thankful if you could give it a thought and use it as a place for car parking.
It will benefit employees in different ways. One of the most significant advantage of that is, employees are not have to be worry about their car so, they can concentrate on their duty better.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
F. BAGHERI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...s enough for cars parking and it always lead to numerous issues. I am going to g...
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Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...advantage of that is, employees are not have to be worry about their car so, they ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, really, so, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59411764706 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70005126185 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6373162276 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140762606598 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640558468783 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578540038962 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620737626571 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056647137652 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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