Dear Madam,
I am interested in attending the seminar being conducted in Canada. I am writing this letter to know more details about it.
Firstly, I would like to know the dates of the seminar as I can plan my work accordingly and won't arrange any meetings during that time. Also, could you please send me the booklet in which the program schedules are as I would like to understand what topics would be covered.
Additionally, in which hotel would we be put up in during the stay.Being my first trip to Canada I am not familiar with the transportation system and would prefer a hotel closer to the venue. Could you please advice if I can opt for selecting my own place to stay.
Lastly, what would be the cost of the whole trip? Could you please provide additional information for the same. Also, please let me know what costs would be covered by the company and what expenses I have to bear.
Looking forward to receiving a clear picture on the above as soon as possible. Please feel free to reach out to me if you need any additional information.
Kind Regards,
Mary Ann
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Being
...l would we be put up in during the stay.Being my first trip to Canada I am not famili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58163265306 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51980906703 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3533789268 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190644451059 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673486665611 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447554725281 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101021010551 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055730209895 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.