The civic centre will be planned to change. There are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for new.
The two maps describe the current situation of the civic center and the future plan for this center. Overall, the re-design of the civic center presents the location changes in all the buildings except the concert hall and the shopping center, with a library disappearing and a theater, an open park and a hotel & restaurant appearing.
Starting with the first may, a concert hall stands between the car park at the top-left side and another one at the top-right side, on the south of which is a shopping center. To the south of the concert hall is situated a council office, with an exhibition hall to the west and a library to the east.
Turning now to the new plan, the library will be removed from this area, and on its location will be the exhibition hall. Meanwhile, the council office will be moved to the previous location of the exhibition hall. Also, the previous location for the council office will become a larger place which consists of two floors, one for an open park and the other for an underground car park. The old car parks will be substituted for by a new theatre westward and by a hotel and restaurant eastward.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64532019704 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48762314972 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467980295567 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5492521893 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243000935235 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116810040589 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089021092294 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148622625946 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118277550822 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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