The civic centre will be planned to change. There are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for new.
The given maps illustrate the current situation of a civic centre and give a proposed idea in the future.
As can be seen, more green covers will be supplemented in the future. In addition, there will be not any library in the centre.
At the moment, there are two car parks in two top corners of the picture, however they will be cleared out to make way for a theater and a hotel and restaurant. In the north of the centre, a concert hall will stay intact and so will shopping center, it will remain its location at the present.
At the bottom of the maps, an exhibition hall situated in the southwest will be replaced by a council office as the new plan. An open park and underground car park will be constructed in the place of current office for council. To the southeast, a library will be flattened to give space for an exhibition hall
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- The two maps below shw an island, before and after the constrction of some tourist dacilities 78
- The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2020 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. 73
- The civic centre will be planned to change There are two maps one is the existing and the other is the plan for new 82
- Organized tours to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment? 84
- Some parents should spend time on reading or telling stories to children, while others thinks that children can read through a variety of sources such as books, TV and Internet by themselves. Discuss both view and give opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'shop'
Suggestion: shop
...ncert hall will stay intact and so will shopping center, it will remain its location at ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47770700637 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50531505271 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.188652892 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306092939423 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131208263317 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486847060941 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1595974715 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541047935762 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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