Nowadays, sports has introduced as a crucial part of kids' education in many nations. It seems to be a golden idea by considering its plethora of benefits. This essay is in the agreement if given statement.
To begin with, team sports develops many good qualities in children at early age which are useful for them in their future such as acceptance, sharing, team spirit and cooperation. To explain, when children play together in a group they support each other and accept ideas of peers and respect each them. These qualities make them good citizens of society.
Moreover, group sports make children more active at motor skills, and develop leadership skills in them. It also makes them extrovert. To explain, while playing kids communicate with other and develop good vocabulary and confidence. Last but not least, it also makes kids more likely to accept loss as like as victory without envy of opposite team.
Considering to all good consequences of team sports like development of sharing, acceptance, communication skills, it is quite evident that team sports is a vital aspect of kids' education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72206586167 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620879120879 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8519436327 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904206884769 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319924192861 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348668960537 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616775660245 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279690095624 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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