You recently met a couple who will be visiting your town. Write a letter to them and say
– Suggest what to bring
– Recommend where they should stay
– What places they should visit
Dear mrs and mr kapoor
Hello! I hope this letter finds you in pink of your healths. It was a great privilege to meet people like you and i am really excited and eagerly waiting for your visit to my town. I would like to tell you about things to need to bring and some brief information about my place.
The climate at my hometown is bit cold as winters have started, so, kindly bring some warm clothes.Also, i suggest to wear a comfortable shoes as there are many places to visit and you require to walk a lot. I insist on staying at my place as my house got plenty of space and I and my parents will be very happy to welcome you at our residence.
there are many historical buildings in my town and I recommend we try to visit as many as we can. The famous ones are the city palace,fort palace, rose garden , the old cloth market .I will be your host for all of your tour here.
Looking forward to see you soon.
yours lovingly
Heena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear mrs and mr kapoor Hello! I hope this letter finds you in p...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t privilege to meet people like you and i am really excited and eagerly waiting f...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...lace. The climate at my hometown is bit cold as winters have started, so, kindl...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...ted, so, kindly bring some warm clothes.Also, i suggest to wear a comfortable shoes ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o, kindly bring some warm clothes.Also, i suggest to wear a comfortable shoes as ...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'shoe'?
Suggestion: shoe
...s.Also, i suggest to wear a comfortable shoes as there are many places to visit and y...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'walking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: walking
...re many places to visit and you require to walk a lot. I insist on staying at my place ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...py to welcome you at our residence. there are many historical buildings in my tow...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fort
...an. The famous ones are the city palace,fort palace, rose garden , the old cloth ma...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the city palace,fort palace, rose garden , the old cloth market .I will be your h...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alace,fort palace, rose garden , the old cloth market .I will be your host for al...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ace, rose garden , the old cloth market .I will be your host for all of your tour...
^^
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e, rose garden , the old cloth market .I will be your host for all of your tour ...
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Line 8, column 18, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...l of your tour here. Looking forward to see you soon. yours lovingly Heena ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... Looking forward to see you soon. yours lovingly Heena
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Line 10, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward to see you soon. yours lovingly Heena
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Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you soon. yours lovingly Heena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24175824176 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25505030404 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2921517611 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208336810693 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804230964991 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230940090697 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887228961366 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580960697984 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.