Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments, or even criticism their teachers. Other think it will lead to loss of respect and displine in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern age education quality are improve and some high school students are take the argument to the teacher. Where as, some people think it is criticism on their teacher. While other think it will lead to loss of respect and displine in classroom. I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in following paragraphs.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that in the classroom argument are make by students to teacher. There are probably a number of factors involved some time in the classroom teachers speed become high to read the chapter but some students are weak in the classroom. As a consequence students make the criticism. As well as tend to be subsequent factor could be that some time tough chapter are studied by the teacher or it is difficult for students to adore the knowledge and students make argument to their own satisfaction it is obviously favourable because majority of students tend to be learn every thing.
However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of, some time a clever student make argument for the purpose of disturbance in classroom. As a consequence it has adverse effects on the teacher because in the classroom teacher study the students in equal flow if any one create noise so teachers behave look a obstinate on a students, and teachers are more likely to restrict the students to stop argument. Now a days strict rules are make by principal and rules are followed by the student to stop argument.
To conclusion, although there are good reason to make arrangements but in opinion I would pen down by saying that if the have any doubt without any hesitation they go to student and discuss their problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80136986301 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6893833654 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496575342466 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4234388857 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236663859494 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111058232356 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837631648136 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162899366371 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11221028881 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.