Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
There is no shortage of debate about whether young people participate enough in the communities or not. In my opinions, they help their communities even more than before, but it is not seen as their ways differ from the traditional ways of helping the community. I believe this way for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, there are a lot of young students in research groups and universities working on project. these works might not be seen often in the society immediately. Their results sometimes take time to be able to become practical. You can say the way to contribute to society has changed in the last decades. My own experience is a compelling example of this. As I studied in university for my master degree in architecture, I used to do a lot of research on different subjects, and the rest of my classmates acted this way, too. These researches often took time and labor to finish and most of them were not practical at the time. But others continued them later and step by step they got closer to become practical and be used in the society. Although, they might not seem big help at the time of research, they contributed a lot to the community when finished and released. Now I enjoy a successful career as I have done practical research in my field of work. For this reason, I believe young people do contribute to their communities.
Secondly, the quality of work has changed in recent years. While some decades ago helping was done only in physical work and seen by people as soon as done by someone - for example someone young - Today the internet has changed everything. Working for you community might not be just physical work anymore and virtual things done in the internet cannot be simply seen by others. I can mention my own cousin as an example. As he graduated from university, he started working from home as a developer, writing code for web sites and other projects. Although he earned good money and developed very well received web sites, his family and friends often thought he was just playing around on the internet and not doing anything important. His work were not simply seen by others as the way people help their communities has changed in the past years. virtual work has taken over the physical world. Accordingly, I think younger people of our societies still contribute to our communities but in a different way.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that your people these days spend enough time to help their communities. This is because that young people works and contribution takes time to become practical and lots of them are doing research and working on projects. And also because the quality of helping has changed and become virtual and it is not seen as easily by others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2294.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72989690722 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61399933195 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461855670103 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.0 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0885299891 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2307692308 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6538461538 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42307692308 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 3.4128256513 469% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253343830428 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750847065299 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981123096394 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198847834 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09231653745 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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