Although more and more people read news in the internet, newsapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent year, the world has witnessed the prevalence of the Internet and people consider it as a viral way to access information. Although newspaper is the traditional press, I strongly believe that the development of the Internet will be steadily just important in the social media.
On the one hand, I opine that traditional press as newspaper remains its role in the Internet age. Firstly, newspaper is the viable instrument of communicating and transmission of the information, no one can deny its contribution for the society. Secondly, not everyone wants or enable to access the social networking platforms due to the barrier in the media and economy. For instance, people who live in the urban or the remote place is isolated from the life in metropolises, thus prevent them from the exposure to technology advance. Finally, on an individual level, it is difficult for the elderly to look at a computer screen and search for the news, thus they like holding and reading the paper rather than suffering the Internet.
On the other hand, the breakthrough in the Internet bring about various advantages for human, especially in the communication. The principal reason is the convenience of using the Internet, permitting us much faster access to news or information, even providing a source of articles, books, documents and so on which deserve for study purpose. Another key benefit of online news compared to the traditional one is the ability to share and discuss issues without any geographical barrier. For example, citizens the world over enable to approach songs, videos or creations of other nations, blurring the boundaries among countries. Moreover, using this source of news is eco-friendly because it does not release any toxic which is damage the nature.
In conclusion, although newspaper is till the traditional way to update news and information, the Internet will soon become the most important source for human in the technology era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19182389937 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93646209236 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1954092799 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205407470677 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692214969175 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635704807364 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144548780505 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590002879618 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.