Some people think that young people are more creative than older people in business or in the workplace.
Do you agree or disagree with this?
In contemporary life, it is claimed that the older people are less inventive than the younger one in their work. I totally disagree with this opinion.
it is obvious that there are a growing number of young employees who attract multifarious recruiters because of their ability in approaching to the latest technology, which allows them to update much information widely. Moreover, they are more open-minded to new ideas than the older, which assists them to synthesize new ideas from a wide variety of sources. Hence, young generation is also trained well in handling with advanced technology such as computers and smartphones, useful tools for creative work. Nevertheless, younger people are still short of responsibilities and reliance. Some of them are usually absent from the workplace with an excuse about “sickness”, for example.
On the other hand, the older have more responsibilities and experiences also. they are aware of their role in family and economic problems, which makes them more responsible. Even though they are not able to keep up with high technology so rapidly compare to the young, they have wisdom and knowledge about solving daily events and work, which they have built from their early stage of career. However, the older people are afraid of taking the risk because of their burden of responsibility, so they hardly accept new challenges. this seems to explain somehow why younger people are expectedly more creative.
In conclusion, everyone is different in several certain aspects and it is our priority to help workers to raise their full potential. By working together, young people and old people can contribute their best to the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28518518519 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9472011321 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9749427009 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274912991706 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101796795225 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732283545908 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183682100594 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449901105895 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.