The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past. Do you think advantage of this trend outweigh the disadvantage.
The age comparison of among parents and children are rising up as compare to the ancient time. A number of people think that it is negative effect for society for development, While other opposite for this view. This essay will explain the benefits of this trend in the society and show some negative point for early marriage
First and foremost point is that modern generation prefer marriage after making career in interesting field, without any family pressure because they think that if they properly settle in the career, they can easily give every facilities for their family after marriage, whereas cause of early wedding of people in ancient time was fall to properly handling their children and giving better education cause of uneducation . For example early time people did not complete their study cause of parents behaviour who did not know the importance of study.
Secondly, if marriage done in mature age,couples can manage their children more efficient way, as result of well-educated parents they always try to giving better education and lifestyle for making better career in the society
In the conclusion, according to my point of view marriage should be done in mature age, which can grow up their children better for building strong root for their country as well as family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10280373832 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43318503194 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565420560748 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.162631219 49.4020404114 375% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.4 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165994946772 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102749859928 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466261271931 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109092357277 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345211035991 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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