Some people prefer to plan the activities for their free time very carefully.others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that planning for the activities plays a vital role in achieving the objectives.one of the most controversial issue today relates to some people prefer to plan the activities for their leisure time while other believe that it is necessary? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On the one hand, there are the group of people who believe that planning is essential for any activity Broadly speaking, the Prominent reason is it save the precious time of the people. To exemplify, people believe that if they want to visit any historical places such as Museum and temples.planning is important because they take some knowledge from the internet about the place and this help them to arrange all the necessary things on time.Furthermore, this help them to enjoy the vacation and they spend their time with hapiness.Therefore, planning is necessary.
Contrary to this, there are some people who argue that planning for the leisure time is unnecessary.For example, they believe that it is the wastage of money.Similarly, sometimes planned activities get cancelled because of the sudden occurrence of the problems.Secondly, some people love to take decision spontaneously.However, they enjoyed taking unplanned decision and they don't want to take any unnecessary stress.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusion.still,i tske this ground that an effective clap requires the both use of hand so planning is necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, broadly speaking, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13257575758 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2097238588 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.718863193 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.833333333 106.682146367 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.8333333333 7.06120827912 352% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283959727335 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151914043371 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763389379803 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18540351461 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316810895784 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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