Some people aim to achieve balance between work and other parts of lives, but few achieve it. Why are the possible problems and what would be the possible solutions.
These days, having a good worklife balance is a steep challenge that many people have to face with, and unfortunately many failed in doing so. An over-demanding job coupled with a poor time management skills could be considered as possible causes. Luckily, people have the option to apply for a less stressful job and/or learn how to plan properly their time to do both work and enjoy the life.
It is undeniable that the better jobs positions, those with high wages and attractive benefits, are extremely demanding. A manager position, for instance, have to work long hours, deal with unsatisfied clients, meet deadline, compose and write complex reports, etc. This overload work scenario create a stressful environment in people's life with little room for entertainment, family or even proper rest. Besides this common reality, many individuals simply does not know how to organize their life at all. In other words, they face their upcoming days without a determined schedule, ending up overwhelmed with all the activities and obligations they have to deal with.
Fortunately, as an old adage says, people always have a choice. First, if they are overwhelming, overloading, distressful with their current jobs, they can find another position with less responsibilities and duties, which allow them to find a balance point between profession and private life. Moreover, although it can sound a mere logical deduction, for those unable to manage their time good enough, they can go to any bookstore a buy a planner to help them to build up efficiently their daily hours.
In conclusion, life could be seem as a difficult challenge for all people, particularly for workers with a demanding job or those who simply ignore how to deal with schedules. However, a balanced life at work and at home is a reachable reality. How? by choosing a job less demanding jog or by learning how to organize their time, so there is no excuse.
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- Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to d 76
- Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to d 58
- Should teenagers in high school work part-time? Give reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
- Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...management skills could be considered as possible causes. Luckily, people have th...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun responsibilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...bs, they can find another position with less responsibilities and duties, which allo...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...d at home is a reachable reality. How? by choosing a job less demanding jog or by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.053125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83778736155 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3811296076 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745478084917 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305913667181 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255638920519 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512076603103 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025002974092 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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