Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In this contemporary society, having childbirth later in life is an increasingly popular trend. There are some fundamental reasons behind this phenomenon, which have negative impacts on both family life and community as a whole.
There are two main causes why individuals decide against giving childbirth at the early stage of their life. Firstly, they suppose that career prospects should be the top priority. As a result, they have allocated almost their time to work hard, getting promotion and rewards in lieu of embarking on parenthood. Secondly, delaying birth means they have countless opportunities to experience their personal life by pursuing their hobbies, such as: travelling around the world, taking part in number of parties. These valuable experience could play an integral part in their life afterwards, which not only broaden their horizon but also offer them promising future prospects.
However, I believe that this trend has negative consequences on personal perspective and society at large. The first concern is difficulties which older parents could confront with, compared to those of younger parents, regarding the nurture of babies. To be more precise, even though older parents may have higher socioeconomic status and better living conditions, they are highly likely to face with more obstacles when raising a child, such as ineffective communication with adolescent, because of generation gap. Another consequence could be that older mothers can suffer higher potential health risks, for example, miscarriage or stillbirth in comparison with those of younger mothers. The same is true of babies, who are born by older parents, as the rate of genetic diseases like Down’s symdrome is very high.
In conclusion, the fact is that starting parenthood later in life becomes more and more popular by some known reasons and this trend causes some major concerns towards both personal and social perspectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46333333333 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78090912393 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.295105459 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24612259793 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788645475313 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654916917904 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154405445901 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578474735182 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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