You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr. Barnes,
I regret to inform you about my disappointment in seeing the state of the interiors, of the apartment I am currently renting. I am British-American, and am not well acquainted with the locality, and yet I trusted your renting service.
The reality and the images of the flat, provided on the renters' website don’t look alike. I was extremely displeased to see a broken dining table. The hinges of the cupboards are loose, and the chairs are squeaking.
The couch in the living room is extremely uncomfortable and has plenty of coffee stains. The embarrassment is keeping us from inviting our new friends and family to our new residence.
I request you to replace or repair the furniture in my apartment, immediately. I hope you will take the necessary action or I may have to deduct a substantial amount from the monthly cheque towards you.
Hope you will rectify this issue at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Kathleen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'renters'' or 'renter's'?
Suggestion: renters'; renter's
...the images of the flat, provided on the renters website don't look alike. I was ex...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... loose, and the chairs are squeaking. The couch in the living room is extremel...
^^^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rtable and has plenty of coffee stains. The embarrassment is keeping us from inviti...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...riends and family to our new residence. I request you to replace or repair the f...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sue at the earliest. Yours sincerely, Kathleen
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0125 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02530990148 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4467777819 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9090909091 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167510088655 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543585002921 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530354843917 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647334654689 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465486227097 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.