More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes .is this attitude to wearing cothes a positive or negative development?
The trend of wearing fashionable clothes are raising day by day. Though it makes uncomfortable to wear , people these days want to wear designer clothes.However,In my opinion i believe that this attitude of dressing is a negative development.
One serious problem that can be seen that nowadays people socializing is leading fashion market to grow economically and be in upfront. Before social media, people were fashionable, they used to attire which was at least comfortable.But considering the current situation media has influenced a lot in fashion industry, they not only make clothes but the point of view has changed dramatically. Moreover, every day there are new aspirants who want to be a model and build a career in this field somehow it is shocking that their lives changes both inner and out once stepping in this industry.
Another issue is that people follow their inspirations and keep a desire to be like them.They dress like them and change oneself completely to be exactly like their role model. Though it might not cause too much difference but changing oneself does not make the person who you are.Furthermore, wearing costly clothes made by recognized designers becomes a status symbol and difference of attitude towards each other can be noticed. That is to say, most models go to depression due to the problem of competition in fashion field. There are incidents were models had a depression and anxiety due to wardrobe malfunction which made them humiliated. The world is glamorous from outside but the reality can known only once dug deep.
In conclusion, although it has be more more popular for people to be fashionable and be in trend, it has brought about too many problem for this to be considered as a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02054794521 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91786718517 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3909296226 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.272727273 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212859919467 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077937797922 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720316250598 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144648117967 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783328557078 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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