Children brought up in families with less money are better prepared for life than those from wealthy families.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and include example
It is often considered that adolescents rose in middle and lower middle class families are much ready for life’s difficult situation instead of elite class teenagers. I personally, concur with above statement.
To begin with, a child, who grow up in the poor family become much more adaptable and mentally strong; they do not give up easily on difficult situation and believe in continues hard work. In fact, they start facing challenges at early age and learn to overcome with patience from their parents; therefore such children never get into depression when they do not succeed. Furthermore, while growing up in destitute conditions a child starts appreciating the value of money, life and relationship. Hence, in future they become cautious and judicious about every small decision and give second thought to each step they take in life: like analyzing pros and cons. On the contrary, a wealthy child often takes life and their assets for granted and when life test them; they generally fail to cope up with. Such children are easily led to anxiety and sometime self destruction in tough circumstance.
Secondly, youth from poverty background barely indulge into drug abuse because of money constraint and parent’s extra care and attention. Whereas, a rich child receive humongous amount of pocket money in compensation of parents’ time, which they generally spend on drug, party and adventure. Last but not least, an underprivileged youngster study hard to excel in academics to achieve their life’s goal; for example a scholarship is always obtained by middle-class student but never by an affluent pupil.
To conclude, I reaffirm that a child from poverty background is mentally and emotionally stronger than affluent one. They become considerate and value the importance of study and hard work; moreover, accept the challenges with smile.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in fact, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34797297297 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84405488557 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631756756757 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9398459166 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190063521135 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646124948488 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356397293135 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981766123582 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048205642219 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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