Metropolitan cities around the world have a similar challenge in common, overpopulation. This essay aims to enlist a few sources of this problem, followed by logical solutions.
One significant cause of population explosion is bad habit. People tend to patronize the saying "Come what may". They just keep on adding a new member of the family right after their youngest arrives. As per the report of Philippine National Statistics Office, surprisingly stated that the average family member in urban slums was consisted with 7-8 people, roughly 5 to 6 siblings in a family. Moreover, indigence also plays an important role in this issue, family that is struggling to bring food to their plate tends to consider education as a necessity, in result, these people don't have enough wisdom on how to properly start a family.
These problems are grievous, thus an action should be executed as soon as possible. One well-known solution is to disseminate information about family planning. This consist of valuable advice and instruction on how to grow a worry-free family. Another solution is that the government must focus on combating poverty. Public agencies should offer free education to indigent individuals and also mobilize education primarily in urban slums. This ensures that people will be educated enough to know and cater their family needs, thus lowering the possibility of oversize family.
To conclude, overpopulation which roots from bad habits and lack of education due to poverty is tough to counter, but with proper family planning and government aid, this universal problem can be effectively eradicated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36964980545 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88036054307 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649805447471 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5155220991 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222623191529 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665324058743 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615087254172 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145707605627 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535217379322 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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