The evolution of tourism that utilizes English as its medium is becoming eminent across any other language in the globe. Due to this, a few people think that English will be the sole language to be used globally in one of these days. This essay aims to portray a few advantage and disadvantage of this trend, followed by a logical conclusion.
One of positive, perhaps the most sensible is breaking the language barriers. Travelers who are not equipped with multilingual skills are mostly having a hard time expressing themselves to locals. For example, Japan is one of the top most tourist destination spots in the world, mostly in "ber months" since it's the time when the snow falls. However, sadly most of the local residents are not able to speak English, which makes it tough for the foreigners to navigate to different tourist spots, buy some things or even ask for a direction. Having a unified language will solve this dilemma.
With regards to the disadvantage, the promotion's for a single universal language can also be the cause of killing traditional languages. People who aim on mastering English as its primary language tends to abandon their ancestral language, that will eventually lead to cultural extinction. For instance, since language is a difficult subject to study, people are obliged to focus on it by writing, reading, listening and even speaking it the entire time. This will lead people to forget their own primitive language that was passed from generation to generation.
To conclude, utilizing English as a sole global medium of communication will be of great help since it will eradicate language barriers that result to easy communication. However, adding this language up to someone's sleeves should not lead to abandoning one's local traditional language. Thus, balance on using a single language must be observed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'few advantages'.
Suggestion: few advantages
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... mostly in 'ber months' since its the time when the snow falls. However, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s sleeves should not lead to abandoning ones local traditional language. Thus, balan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13815789474 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80568001988 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8778133804 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.133333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422787050466 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137172011737 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667263560287 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254721566111 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657228545343 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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