People currently are held responsible for contributing a large amount of garbage to mother nature. This essay will portray a few causes of this trend, followed by some steps the government could undertake to mitigate this issue.
Firstly, perhaps the most relevant reason is the population explosion. Global population density in all countries had significantly increased these past few years, which leads to the high demand for family basics needs. For example, the newly born baby needed a lot of primary needs to survive. These ranges from diapers, powdered infant formula milk in a can and even the syringe used for immunization contributes to increasing garbage percentage. Secondly, beverage manufacturers still use plastic or cans to wrap their products. For instance, soda's are still being reproduced and preserved using a plastic bottle or can which is one of the main rubbish source.
This is a crucial problem which needed immediate action. One of the core possible solution that the government can take is spreading family planning. Equipping the people with proper handling a family will help stop adding up new members in a family which will eventually lead to low consumption of needs. Another way is to implement a law to enforce beverage companies to use decomposable wrapping materials like cartons to act as a container for their soda's. This will help to eliminate the number of cans being disposed of improperly.
To conclude, while rubbish is everywhere because of population explosion and utilization of plastic and can to produce sodas are among the top source of waste producers, but with proper know-how on how to handle a family and firmly enforcing a low to remove cans and plastic in the world will ultimately be a good step on mitigating or even eradicating this rubbish around the globe.
- With the development of social media more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the Internet What potential problems may this trend lead to What solutions can you suggest to deal with it 92
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- Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. what are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13087248322 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78933352512 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597315436242 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3486777561 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135535811013 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043662548698 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424319091252 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875103084704 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326999449961 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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