These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.
The world has never seen such a great influx of people from rural areas to urban areas since, the eighth century. In recent decades decentralization and relocation are due to the requirement (obligation) of improved quality of life, which in turn has created chaos by overpopulating the cities.
The crucial reason is the necessity to improve the quality of life because urban cities have excellent opportunities in the job world for skilled and non-skilled labors with competitive remuneration, splendid medical and educational facilities. For instance, farmers in India are under a high amount of debt for the reason that they borrow money to support their livelihood and cultivate crops, and in a high percentage of cases they lose their agrarian production to environmental disasters, such as drought or excessive rainfall or so on because of the changing climatic conditions of the earth. As a result, to meet needs, they either have to sell lands to big landlords or divert their route to urban areas where they have a fixed source of incomes enabling them to get back on their feet.
The side effects of this movement could severely be seen on the overpopulated markets and housing societies as well as congested roads with public and private vehicles. Besides, with the time a substantial negative impact will be on the job market. It is a well-accepted fact that a number of qualified graduated are far in figures then the required job vacancies. Thus, to acquire a white color job, a student needs to have a university degree with internship experience, which earlier could be got through a college degree.
To overcome the above scenarios, the government should reorganize the job market and set up few industries in the rural areas, consequently providing them with a mode of income.
To conclude, though it is true that one deems to improve their lives, even if it is to migrate from their homeland adverse migration effect on the urban area is alarming. Hence, it is the responsibility of the government to take the required measures to curb the negative impact and develop the rural areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
...as since, the eighth century. In recent decades decentralization and relocation are due...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, hence, if, so, then, thus, well, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03133903134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88470788779 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6811868657 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.166666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132137478432 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499292735656 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415114177894 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768813874988 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419008845134 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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