What are the greatest inventions of the 20th century among medicine, aeroplane and computers, why?
The technological era is fulfilled with numerous invention in various fields. it is quite difficult among some analysts to choose which one is the best invention between different categories such as medicine, aeroplane and computers. However, in my consideration the artificial intelligence is above all which I will explain in the following essay with a logical conclusion.
To begin with, all inventions in personal field has their own importance but why computer is at the top; because it is the basic invention who help to trigger other technologies. For an example, in the field of health industry, today we can able to find highly effected organ in the body with the use of magnetic resonance inspection. This is possible due to advanced innovations in computer industry which is not possible before it.
On the other hand, these computers with internet facility can be used to find any information anywhere in the whole world which makes it feasible for the students as well as tutors. Moreover, plethora of innovation has made in aeronautical engineering that are three dimensional designs of Aircrafts can be ready in blink of eye with different softwares. Furthermore, the accurate material required can be arranged from all the corners of world for the manufacturing process through internet facility.
In conclusion, every technology and invention has their own importance but their are operating on some intelligence which is related to basic computer knowlege hence computer technology is above other in all sights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31557377049 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01684723511 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4078117054 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.7 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.25397266985 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104703271326 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444292378093 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747050260573 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667512867643 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643336393508 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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