Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animals all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
Flora and fauna enhances the beauty of nature but today, it gets depleted by the illegal actions done by human beings throughout the globe. People differs in their opinion whether it is the best time to protect plants and animals from mortals or not due to many reasons.
To begin with, some persons believe that it is very difficult to save trees and creatures from humanity as population is increasing day by day. Hence , they clear forests for fulfilling their demand which also causes the destroying of animals. Moreover, multiple industries and factories are establishing to give jobs to the civilization.To illustrate, In India, population is raising at alarming rate and therefore they cut shrubs for their living purposes. As a result, the animals whose natural habitats are forest are getting extinct.
On the contrary, others arguing that if the stringent steps should be taken for the preservation of plants at the right time, the animal species would also survive. Public believe that it is the fundamental duty of government to aware others about the importance of natural gifts like plants and animals. Furthermore, there should be campaigns in cities and countryside to encourage youngsters to grow much more plants as they can as well as to raise the animals either domestic or wild. As well if the young ones understand that it would be also difficult for us to stay longer without plants as we take fresh oxygen for respiration.
In conclusion, my personal prospective is that although it is too late to save herbs and creatures but yet we can take the effective steps such to grow plants on regularly and feed as well as provide habitat to animals will a great help.
- The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 78
- More and more people are opting for readymade food instead of freshly cooked food.does this practicr has more advantages than disadvantages. 56
- Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animals all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both view and give your own opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97192982456 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68327656119 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8982670642 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.818181818 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157381142541 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055463024238 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038411118435 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952669743395 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330846260956 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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