Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include :
• What you bought
• What the problem is
• Why you want a refund
Dear Max,
I am writing about a recent purchase I did from your online website www.karosel.com.I bought a luxurious Rado watch series E4567 last week on Thursday which I intended to gift to my wife as a present on our wedding anniversary.
I have bought electronic products from your website and my experience has been very positive but on this occasion when I received this watch, I found the dial broken. I am really dissatisfied with the cheap casing in which this expensive watch was packed. In fact, I had written a special note to your customer care department to add a protective cover on the top of the casing when I had made the payment but to my surprise, they didn’t bother to follow my instructions.
As you know, I had ordered this watch as an anniversary gift for my wife but due careless attitude and unprofessional behaviour of your customer care I have to face this perplexing situation. Thus I ask a full refund of the amount paid and a voucher with a thirty per cent discount in lieu of the purchase of my next item.
I look forward to your immediate resolution on this matter.
Yours sincerely
Karen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Max, I am writing about a recent purchase I d...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...rom your online website www.karosel.com.I bought a luxurious Rado watch series E4...
^
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a present on our wedding anniversary. I have bought electronic products from y...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed this watch, I found the dial broken. I am really dissatisfied with the cheap c...
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Line 4, column 478, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pos;t bother to follow my instructions. As you know, I had ordered this watch as...
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Line 6, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...have to face this perplexing situation. Thus I ask a full refund of the amount paid ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lution on this matter. Yours sincerely Karen
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, thus, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67164179104 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87829757251 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601990049751 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9126189353 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123927610788 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506131893644 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317528817093 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692091103489 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03502037266 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.