The last decade was dominated by the innovations and inventions in all areas of discoveries, however, advancement in the area of information technology is proven to be game-changing. Due to mammoth innovations in the area of technology and the internet, communication has been evolved significantly worldwide. Proponents are debating over these phenomena, many argue that these changes in communication have many positive influences on society, however, others have opposite views stating that it has created chaos and has detrimental impacts on the humans. In this article, I will discuss both the positive and negative sides of this development.
To begin with, there have been massive changes the way people and businesses do communication these days from earlier postal era to recent e-mail era. Emails are proven to be boon for both the individuals and corporates. With emails, people can communicate seamlessly across the world, moreover, it is almost free and faster which has brought more agility in the communication. Finally, a majority of people stay connected with their family, friends and business partners via online conferencing tools. Furthermore, this evolution has positive impacts on environments in terms of saving paper and the fuel for carrying post.
On the other hand, over-reliance on online communication medium has certain detrimental impacts. For instance, people are not able to take adequate sleep due to round the clock online connectivity, this has severe health impacts. Lastly, these phenomena have led to lifestyle diseases such as obesity due to sedentary life.
In conclusion, form the above examples, it is evident that, if used holistically and properly, advancement in communication can be boon, otherwise, it can be turned in to the ban for society.
- the Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life, and a bride to spread news and awareness and for some, it acts as a companion, what is your option about this? 77
- The environment we are living in is in danger due to the various problem. Whose responsibility is to solve these problems government, a private organization, or individuals? And what measures can be taken? (If choose individual). 77
- the Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 80
- Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss pros and cons of this change. 88
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47122302158 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13045755521 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607913669065 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.973869105 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144442659646 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479761039035 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415662191289 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765600371185 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481642143705 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.