assessment the budget for the universities to pursue all students satisfaction is a hard issue. Many debates has raised recently to give the sports and social activities the same funding of the libraries and classes. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that at universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, investing in sports and social activities will help students to find out their interest and encourage them to pursue their dreams because not all students have the interest in science and other subjects, and my brother is a compelling example for this. When my younger brother was at elementary school, he was dislike studying. He was spending all the day play football, and his big dream was to be a renown player, but unfortunately, his school was giving attention only to science and mathematics so he was upset because he could not achieve get high grade. Then, my parents enrolled him to a new school that gives high attention to sports and fund too much money for improving the quality of sports. His life changed from this time, he became have a lot of encouragement to play better and has become have a passion to his school and love to go to it. As a result, he has participated to a big team in my country and has travelled many countries for competition. That's why; giving attention to sports as same as the other classes will help to change students' life who do not have the passion to the classes and libraries.
Second of all, funding for social activities and sports will help students to engage on social life and make friends. For instance, when I was at my freshman year at college, I was so shy and could not make new friends. So, I started to participate in a basket ball class to help me have friends and therefore, my personality has changed from introvert, shy person to a social friend. I have become have many friends that we go out and study with each other. As a result, making new friends assisted me to have a good time with them and that affected my studying positively. I have become have the courage to focus on my studying too because I have become energetic all the time. That's why; social activities and sports is important to help students to invest their free time making new friends and engage on social life which has a big role to change the students mode to their studying.
To sum up, although the issue of funding for the sports and classes is on debate, I agree with the statement that universities and college should give equal funds to sports and social activities as same as the classes and libraries for two reasons, To help students find out their interest and to enhance their social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63510848126 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56955723858 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.400394477318 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7228941094 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.684210526 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6842105263 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254741780481 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967255046589 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168524706439 0.0737576698707 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232758212147 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168314791013 0.0645574589148 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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