The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper.
"Commuters complain that increased rush-hour traffic on Blue Highway between the suburbs and the city center has doubled their commuting time. The favored proposal of the motorists' lobby is to widen the highway, adding an additional lane of traffic. But last year's addition of a lane to the nearby Green Highway was followed by a worsening of traffic jams on it. A better alternative is to add a bicycle lane to Blue Highway. Many area residents are keen bicyclists. A bicycle lane would encourage them to use bicycles to commute, and so would reduce rush-hour traffic rather than fostering an increase".
The topic discusses about a letter regarding the problems faced by the commuters travelling on the Blue Highway during rush-hours. The proposal of the motorists' lobby is to add an additional lane, which the author counters by providing the example of the nearby Green Highway. He later presents the solution of adding a bicycle lane to the Blue Highway, stating that many area residents are keen bicyclists and thus would reduce the traffic significantly. There are certain flaws in the above letter, some of which need to be solved for the solution to work.
Firstly the author states that an additional lane should not be added as the nearby Green Highway had persistent problems even after the addition of the extra lane. Here there are certain inaccuracies as there is no certainty that the solution will fail as it did in case of the Green Highway. Both Highways are different and maybe the problems of Blue Highway would be solved. Also it is the motorist lobby who has given the way to counter and may be they have accurate data for the solution they have presented.
Secondly there is the case of constructing the bicycle lane to encourage the area residents. If the commuters travel long distances to reach their destinations, they may not be able to use bicycles for their commute. Also the highway may not be just used by the nearby area residents. People who do not live there may have no use of the additional bicycle lane.
Thirdly even if the bicycle lane is used there is no mention if the rush-hour traffic will be affected in any significant way. The cost of adding the additional lane may not outweigh the solution it presents. Thus the problem would still persist.
In conclusion the author has to provide data regarding differences between the two highways and to disprove the motorists' opinion giving the required proofs. Also the solution of adding a bicycle lane does not seem to provide the essential solution.
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- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper."Commuters complain that increased rush-hour traffic on Blue Highway between the suburbs and the city center has doubled their commuting time. The favored proposal of the motorists 43
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 333 350
No. of Characters: 1578 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.272 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.739 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.499 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.078 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.765 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.565 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.058 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: ADD_AN_ADDITIONAL[1]
Message: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply 'add a lane'.
Suggestion: add a lane
...e proposal of the motorists lobby is to add an additional lane, which the author counters by providing...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...oblems of Blue Highway would be solved. Also it is the motorist lobby who has given ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...by who has given the way to counter and may be they have accurate data for the solutio...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...able to use bicycles for their commute. Also the highway may not be just used by the...
^^^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... not outweigh the solution it presents. Thus the problem would still persist. In ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'motorists'' or 'motorist's'?
Suggestion: motorists'; motorist's
...en the two highways and to disprove the motorists opinion giving the required proofs. Als...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...sts opinion giving the required proofs. Also the solution of adding a bicycle lane d...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 333.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84984984985 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57086874867 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468468468468 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 705.55239521 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0070600203 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 23.324526521 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.70786347227 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134486062007 0.218282227539 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479897516192 0.0743258471296 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488194294531 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081717907003 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444423776838 0.0628817314937 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.3799401198 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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