Some people view giving presents as an important way way to show care to family and friends, others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and appreciation.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, people express their feelings and emotions by giving presents to their loved ones. Some people think that giving gifts to someone is a sweet gesture of love and care, whereas other masses believe in other ways of showing their concern. However, I opine that we do not always need money to buy gifts to exhibits our emotions. There are many alternatives to express love and care. In this essay I will discuss both view points along with my opinion with relevant examples in upcoming paragraph.
To embark with, in the present materialistic world, gifts have taken a prestigious place. Due to fast life and spending more time in work, many people fail to balance work and life. As a result, commitments are maintained by giving gifts rather than meeting personally. Secondly, people can make their relationships strong by giving gifts and presents. For example, sometimes people are unable to show their feelings towards their loved ones. So, they find gifts as the best way of expressing their feelings. Moreover, communication gap between family members makes relationship strained. In a way, gifts are not only important to start a relationship but also to maintain it.
On the other side, from my perspective, despite of presenting gifts there are many other ways to show our feelings for our loved ones. Firstly, care is essential for both family as well friends as compare to materialistic things like gifts. For instance, people can help their friends through care and support in their bad or worse time. Likewise children can care their parents by their affection as well as care, especially in their olg age because in this stage every parents expect support, love and care from their children. Also, by cooking delicious food and going out together, people can show their love for those person whom they truly love. In addition, it is always said that, time is the most precious gift as compare to other worldly things like presents. A lot of people in this busy and fast pace life need someone to listen their problems and empathise with them. Last but not the least, people with low income cannot afford to give costly gifts. They shower their lovr and concern with advice.
In conclusion, no doubt, gifts provide happiness to both the giver as well as taker but I think that in spite of materialistic things love, affection, care, appreciation and support are priceless and even low income people can afford these cberished presents rather than luxury gifts which only give rise to evils like social status and increase gap in relations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95823665893 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47207692954 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5313225058 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0999560134 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9130434783 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7391304348 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274812072386 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798928404073 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601009379059 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181584953462 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492390913473 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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