Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There has been a constant debate on whether guardians should encourage children to take part in activities that involve teamwork or let the latter decide what to do in their free time. I strongly believe children should be inspired to work in various group activities.
Children should be guided and motivated to become more involved in group activities as this will enhance the interaction skills such as discuss, debate and empathy. They will also learn how to co-ordinate and work in a team and become involved in activities that may help develop them physically as well. For example, children playing cricket will require them to plan, prepare strategies, be active and spontaneous. In a scientific research, it has been proven the children who are actively involved in organised group activities tend to retain more information.
However, some parents believe children should be given the freedom to select activities on their own. While this may allow children to become creative and pursue the task or activities do like the most, certain children tends to be involved with gadgets like mobile phones and video games in which they aren't compelled to do any manual tasks or human interactions. Therefore, their development both mentally and physically is not as much as those involved in group activities. Furthermore, this may cause problems like depression and anxiety, while the children involved in various activities can easily deal with them without much trouble.
From the above, it is clear while children should be granted the freedom to determine their choice of activities, opportunity to work as a team in a group will gain more beneficial effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21481481481 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73849758054 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2928395014 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290841511175 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130112340862 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720838619522 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190458082707 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517768344838 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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