You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Studying abroad provides many opportunities and challenges. You are meeting new friends from other countries, learning to be independent and take care of yourself when you are far away from home. Also, the most important you have a chance to improve the language you are learning with native speakers.
First of all, when I was studying in Turkey I have a chance to learn about their culture and holidays because they are different from my culture. I tried their food and learned about their history. Also, I have a chance to attend one Turkish wedding where I saw their tradition. I have a chance to explore and understand their traditions in a deeper way than is explained in the books or in the movies. Moreover, in my university I participated in an event International Cultural Days where we needed to represent our country. I and my friends made a presentation about Macedonia and, we made traditional food. Through this event, we presented our culture to other students and, learned something about other cultures and tried their traditional food.
Secondly, I grow up and become mature. When you are at home you do not think a lot because your parents are always beside you. But, when you are far from home you need to make your own decision and you are thinking twice before making something. I become independent, responsible and learn to appreciate what I have. Moreover, I improve my communication skills. For instance, before I was a very shy person and I do not talk a lot of with people nor correspond with unknown people. But now I am not anymore that shy person who does not speak with people.
Finally, there are also things that maybe you will not like. For example, I felt sad when I was not with my family at Christmas and other holidays. Also, I faced with strong competition at the university whose language is native, and I was stressed about this situation. These feelings sometimes might be so much that alters people`s decision not to study abroad.
In conclusion, studying abroad has advantages and disadvantages, but experiences you will have are stronger not to give up your dreams.
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- Summarize the main points in the lecture, and then explain how they cast doubt on the ideas in the reading passage. 73
- TOEFL TPO 05 - Integrated Writing Task 71
- Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken Which is better Give the advantages of each and support your viewpoint 91
- Integrated essay 3
- Summarize the main points in the lecture, and then explain how they cast doubt on the ideas in the reading passage. 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...vantages, but experiences you will have are stronger not to give up your dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84109589041 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77768768645 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528767123288 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4778373257 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3181818182 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279288605933 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804993314595 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996783489458 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181025068971 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826002118511 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.