The idea of that is providing online course by some university is to alter the way of delivering class to student on campus that has brought contrasting views. In this following essay, I tend to belive that the development of this is more impacted positively than the negative drawback.
First of all, it is true that online course could bring convienient to the people who have tight schedule of their life style. A good case of this point is that the online distance-learning may be an option to these people who they are able study without traveling out from their place or workplace, enhancing these people to utilize time efficiently to do work or even arrange their business program. Futhermore, during the online study student usually must pay more attention and listen carefully because the lecture mostly deliver in short-time. This is encouraging student to more self-study rather than teacher-led disscussion in their class which turn the way of student study to autonomous learning as a effective guided learning process.
On the other hand, despite the benefits of online courses, there is an drawback associeted with this dillema. The face-to-face culture of study has be changed while the progression of online study. For example, the student are unable to study in group work with their peers.
By the way of conclusion, hence the negative drawbacks could be seen, i tend to argue the virtues which has been brought by the online courses more beneficial. The student can study effectively even in far distance and study effectively while if some university replace the offline study, the culture of this may be extinct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, so, while, for example, in short, by the way, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05535055351 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74152110402 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549815498155 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2865594347 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.545454545 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243948992395 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096590582068 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754374671442 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174330653541 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114987845352 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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