Rapping a woman is a heinous of crime. Some people think that it is a woman's fault while other believe that it is due to gender inequality.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
The most wrongful act of felony is to steal the respect of women forcefully. Owing to this, some people believe that this mistake can only be done by a woman while other believe that this crime can be attributed to gender differences. Although, a person can be attracted by a friendly nature of a woman, I believe that gender imbalance in terms of men are superior than women is the pivotal reason behind this wicked act.
On the one hand, woman flaunt herself to a man to fascinate him towards her. This is because, nowadays, amiable nature of a woman with every male as well as the competition with other females to look superior can be taken as a fault of woman which ultimately mislead a man to do utterly odious activity with woman. For example, recently a man did horrible activity because woman immediately involved with him in order to look better than other females which which misguide that man absolutely. Moreover, joyful nature is the not only thing, but, fashionable attires and roaming with ample of male friends can also be taken into account as woman's fault. However, I believe that, gender inequality is the cardinal reason why this type of outrageous activities are occurring.
On the other hand, women are always taken for granted by men due to prejudice in terms of gender. That is to say that, mindsets of men have been developed in such a way by society that men always rank themselves high compare to women in each and every field which astray them to do shocking act due to gender inequality. To illustrate, an eminent actor Shaini Ahuja raped his servant because he thought that as she is woman she will not do anything. So, gender imbalance plays an imperative role. In addition to that, bias in gender always decourage women to raise a voice against this horrifying act which in turn patronize men to do wrongful act. Hence, it can be substantiated that, gender unequity is the key factor behind this monstrous felony.
In conclusion, though, some friendly gestures by a woman can grab the attention of a man, I believe that, not having equilibrium between these two genders is the main reason behind this wicked crime and it is recommended that, Sov should give more importance to women in each and every field in order to destroy gender inequality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74874371859 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53739985423 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497487437186 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9498590841 49.4020404114 146% => OK
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Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.079792497672 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567116714377 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152225931608 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320413892798 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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