Recently, the phenomenon of recent inventions' influences and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that these inventions cannot be highly beneficial to the society, such an issue is regarded as constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that recent invention can be effective and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree that recent inventions are detrimental to society. At first, some invention made us less exercise and lazier than before. However, some of them affected the daily works and industries positively. For example, after the advent of the computer the speed of computing and calculating and it used in all industries today.
In addition, despite all advantages with last inventions in people's life, they make people addicted to them. Television is one of the recent inventions used as entertainment that influenced the living of many people all around the world. For instance, recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of people spend a lot of time in TV watching every day.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I am inclined to believe that the benefits of the last inventions far outweighed their drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32420091324 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01723191245 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6811505123 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119267707165 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476395682801 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416319502174 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654847939764 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251287593362 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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