Has there been any recent invention that you think proved either beneficial or detrimental to the society?
Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Recently, the phenomenon of benefits or harms from some recent inventions and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that these achievements are highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly both destroyer and negative by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that recent inventions can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From many experts standpoint, the human inventions can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that harms, as well as misuse of an instrument, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered damages of the smart phone, if overused.
Within the realm of social behavior, human innovations might increase the consequences of positive. However, fundamental aspects of harmful effects related to this reality that demerits of inventions like TV pertain to the way of using them. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of watching Television is correlated negatively with its programs.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of recent human inventions far outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52358490566 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1300395463 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655660377358 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2198066755 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.111111111 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109163710427 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406735712327 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319673139238 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609518620381 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202085227737 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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