Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their jobs well. Do you agree?
Holidays are one of the greatest motivation factor for employees. While giving long holidays to employees is a matter of deliberation.
In current working environment employees have to work longer then their normal working hours, sometimes they also have to work over the weekends to perform their task assigned to them by their employer. Impact of these extra working hours on employees health are very evident like mental illness, stress, tiredness additionally their families also have to suffer as working parent don't have sufficient time for their kids and parents
long holidays have several benefits for employees like it helps them rejuvenate themselves, further it provides them opportunity to spend quality time with their family which builds congenial relationship amongst the family. Additionally, when employees are back from holiday they come back with positive energy and enthusiasm which eventually helps them to be more productive and innovative at work making a win win situation for both employee and employer. The flip side of long holiday is that employer's may miss their productive and efficient resources during their holidays also sometimes long holidays make employees lethargic. therefore, in order to avoid any such situation it is very crucial for employers to formulate holiday structure which is logical and at the same time favorable to employees as well for employers as well.
To conclude, it is evident that a well formulated holiday structure will be in the interest of both the parties, therefore in my opinion it would be very beneficial if employers start giving long holidays to their employees
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: than
...vironment employees have to work longer then their normal working hours, sometimes t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36821705426 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7465965194 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.534860959 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.125 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265642737858 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134930649925 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464580040664 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168394765201 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441178862013 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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