Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?
Now in modern era, sports are play almost in every countries. Some individuals says that team sports are mostly promoted as a best way to keep body fit and fine also develop character. While, others says that like soccer tournaments create a violence between supporters and form of angry behaviour. I will shed light on both views in upcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, sports are help to develop the nation more. The team sports are generally help to increase our stamina and to keep person fit. Further there are many team sports like football, cricket, volleyball and basketball etcetra. The person who play these games in international level they have name and fame. The benefits of team sports is there are lots of brain who work if field. The team sport is better then the one player game. Person also build a new character in team sports and they are also promote.
On the other hand, there is a very big disadvantage because in team sports players create more violence. In whole team one players behave antisocial behaviour the reffree out the whole team between the match so whole team are punished for one player. In team sports many players don't understand each other which is not good for team.
To conclude that, if antisocial behaviour cause the sporting events so the team sports is not really good for all, but if they cannot behave like this and promote the more so this is very good for rival supporters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.736 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32177862855 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3182768276 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9333333333 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415626028244 0.242375264174 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137152508513 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070590214188 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24439880055 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382415236357 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.