What are the pros and cons of extreme sports?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
...neficial while other reject this notion.In my opinion I am on both sides. This ess...
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Suggestion: developed
... is that with extreme sports courage is develop inside us . Moreover, these type of spo...
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...reme sports courage is develop inside us . Moreover, these type of sports are very...
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...gthens our bones, makkes our mind sharp.All these merrits stand in good stead.. Bes...
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...rp.All these merrits stand in good stead.. Besides the above merits it also has de...
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Suggestion: Extreme
... the above merits it also has demerits. extreme sports are very dangerous moreover it c...
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...ppening. Any type of accident can occur.For example few days back a boy died while ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 31.9359605911 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 1207.87684729 64% => OK
No of words: 157.0 242.827586207 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93630573248 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5227771885 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707006369427 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 379.143842365 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6397188292 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12366268938 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055188312002 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674402567691 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12366268938 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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