Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
Recently, parents' legal responsibility for their children's behavior has sparked an ongoing controversy. While some believe parents should be enquired by law to accept responsibility of their children's behavior, others maintain that parents are not responsible in this regard. This essay will discuss why parents ought to be legitimately in charge of their children's conduct.
To begin with, this is parents' responsibility, in the first place, to educate their children properly to respect other people's rights, abide by rules, and tell the right from wrong. Parental supervision is a must and parents cannot abandon responsibility of appropriate upbringing to others, for example, educational system. When parents are legitimately compelled to bear the brunt of responsibility of their children, they would be more likely to nurture their children correctly in order not to suffer from legal consequences of their children's misbehavior.
On the other hand, when children understand that their parents will be disciplined by law due to their unintentional or willful conduct, without being involved in any wrong doing, they tend to obey the rules; especially if they once witness the result of their misbehavior being imposed on their parents; once bitten, twice shy. This will, in turn, drastically decreases crime rate in future because children are accustomed to obeying the rules from their childhood.
In conclusion, I believe that holding parents liable for their children's behavior urges parents to pay more attention to child rearing as well as children to observe the law rules which all result in having good members of society in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...esult in having good members of society in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48828125 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93988589526 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4348048084 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.111111111 104.977214359 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.9669160288 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.25397266985 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338107558384 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170571257317 0.0925447433944 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649975714108 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226985846697 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784227134267 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 12.6369458128 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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