Read and think about the following statement: The college years are the best time in a person’s life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
As we all know, the life is very short and complex milestone. To my mind, the life is like a roller coaster. Moreover, it has its own times when we feel happy or sad. Nevertheless, everyone in this world has his or her favored time period,which is precious to that person, and this concept changes with the person. I assume that the college years are the best time in a persons life.
Firstly, in this specific period of time, as a person we could get lots of satisfaction from the variety of activeties, which could be done in the college. To my mind, the main factor which makes college years so precious is the fact of getting to know new people everyday. Moreover, obviously there are lots of students in the colleges. Thus, this means that we have lots of options for picking friends, and enlarging our surrounding. I assume that, everyone would prefer to know as much people as possible. Because this concept could be significantly beneficial in the future.
Secondly, by attending to the lessons in the college we can get enormous amounts of information about the world. Indeed, by obtaining precious information from the college, we can brighten our future. Skeptics could ask why is this concept is important, and the reason is that everything which is taught in the college is for making students sophisticated with life problems. Although, gaining these valuable information could be very challenging, but the outcome is very beneficial. Based on my friends personal life experiences, I could conduct that all of them are very satisfied with their education ,which came from college. Thus, I assume that it is vital to learn all of the information which is taught in the college.
Thirdly, the aspect which makes college extraordinary in a positive way, is the atmosphere that it has. To be more precise, it is very difficult and challenging to expres all of the emotions that could be obtained in everyday life of a college student. What im pointing out is the diversity of the actions which happen there, In my personal experience, there were lots of strange and odd events occured in my college years, and I am very grateful for them.
In conclusion, i thinks because of the aspects which I mentioned before, college years are the most colourful and interesting years of a person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...world has his or her favored time period,which is precious to that person, and this co...
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...he college years are the best time in a persons life. Firstly, in this specific perio...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...rsons life. Firstly, in this specific period of time, as a person we could get lots of satis...
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Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... the fact of getting to know new people everyday. Moreover, obviously there are lots of ...
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Line 2, column 485, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... that, everyone would prefer to know as much people as possible. Because this concep...
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Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fer to know as much people as possible. Because this concept could be significantly ben...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... are very satisfied with their education ,which came from college. Thus, I assume ...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...hus, I assume that it is vital to learn all of the information which is taught in the coll...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...spect which makes college extraordinary in a positive way, is the atmosphere that it has. To be m...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ery difficult and challenging to expres all of the emotions that could be obtained in ever...
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Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...y grateful for them. In conclusion, i thinks because of the aspects which I mentione...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, i think, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82025316456 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75092619616 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488607594937 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1594532831 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8095238095 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178809147467 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618489408865 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719165602693 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121364888639 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586691556469 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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