Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
As we all know there are some exceptional people who have done tremendous amounts of beneficial contributions to this world, to their nation and society. These people have unique attribute which most of us does not have. This skill is called leadership. Every nation in this world had at least one brave, intelligent and very strong leader. Because of those influencers, most of the countries have a significant respect among others. However, not all of those leaders can contribute to their nation in a beneficial way. Because this milestone has a big responsibility, which not everyone can hold it in his or her hands. As a patriotic person, I would like to talk about a leader which made enormous efforts to protect our borders,country and nation from foreign attacks, and the name of this influencer is Heydar Aliyev. This leader always tried to implement actions which could benefit the country and the people who live in it.
Firstly, he has protected our borders from foreign occupation. In the past we have been through hard times as a country, and some neighbor countries tried to invade us for several times. As a result, people was tired of these ongoing attacks from aggressive neighbors. Moreover, these invasions had a detrimental effects on our economy besides the loss of thousands of lives. In conclusion, people did not know what to do for preventing these attacks from neighbors, and someone had to step up to control this country and nation. And that person was Heydar Aliyev. He acknowledged that for development of the country, these nonstop attacks had to be stopped, Thus, his precious diplomatic skills ended the aggression from neighbors, and we won our independence.
Secondly, after acquiring our independence and nation unity, he made tremendous efforts on development of industry in the country, which resulted very positively. The govermental laws which he passed were so significant that those laws helped our country to reach heyday, and improved our industry. I assume that without his existance, we could not been able to get out of those hard days. Moreover, these factors make him an essential and strong historical person in our country, and we all owe him for our liberty.
- Technology made our children less productive. 60
- Distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom learning.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 70
- Extended family 73
- People learn things better from those who are at the same level with them, rather then learning it from highly professional people.Do you agree or disagree with this statement 70
- Internet has problems 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a beneficial way" with adverb for "beneficial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... leaders can contribute to their nation in a beneficial way. Because this milestone has a big respo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , country
... enormous efforts to protect our borders,country and nation from foreign attacks, and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03269754768 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8099791097 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536784741144 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7870068906 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.35 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.35 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118437221798 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388691437817 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388852745856 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759575992837 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621972967508 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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